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Evil Kion- fan comic
This is a form of minimal support for the comic, you will receive early access to publications. You will get a glimpse into the characters that appear earlier. and a few exclusive perks such as acknowledgements and character evolution.
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Redline Request for :3
Overall, there really wasn't much for me to redline! xD It's very good, I really just did some minor tweaks and of course the leg you asked for~
The face looks fine, I just think you need to round the cheeks a little more (the left doesn't match the right), and shorten the muzzle some. The muzzle is spot-on, I think it was just a little too long :3
The leg closest to us should be a tad thinner near the paw I think, and the hind leg is good, but It looks too dramatically tilted, if that makes any sense.. I used the lasso tool to tilt it slightly
I'm not quite sure how to explain the rest xD; Hopefully the redline speaks for itself/helps you in some way!
Overall, there really wasn't much for me to redline! xD It's very good, I really just did some minor tweaks and of course the leg you asked for~
The face looks fine, I just think you need to round the cheeks a little more (the left doesn't match the right), and shorten the muzzle some. The muzzle is spot-on, I think it was just a little too long :3
The leg closest to us should be a tad thinner near the paw I think, and the hind leg is good, but It looks too dramatically tilted, if that makes any sense.. I used the lasso tool to tilt it slightly
I'm not quite sure how to explain the rest xD; Hopefully the redline speaks for itself/helps you in some way!
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This helps a lot!! Thank you <3 I understand every point you made ^^